RESTORED AND RENEWED
Leaping into March,
Spring restores my heart and soul,
flowers blooming ev'rywhere.
Sweet breezes blowing
and spring showers refreshing,
rainbows arch across the sky.
(c) barbara kausteklis 3-2-12
(photo and words)
A Sedoka written for CPC "Friday Fling/
The Friday Fling Takes a Flying Leap-year Into March."
http://www.friendburst.com/blog/82897/friday-fling-takes-flying-leap-year-march/
The Format according to ShadowPoetry.com:
A Sedoka is a Japanese form, "an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives. Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7."
Thanks always for your visits and comments.
~barb~
Glorious Sedoka. You achieved just the effect and presented it flawlessly. This is marvelous!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Leeza! And for commenting here on Blogspot. I'm so glad to be able to share another little bit of our early spring. So many flowering trees blooming already. Happy to share.
DeleteThis is a beautiful poem. Love the pic. Hope you're having a great weekend. :)
ReplyDeleteI quite like reading an article that can make people think.
ReplyDeleteAlso, many thanks for allowing me to comment!
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