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Sunday, March 11, 2012

TREASURED STILL (A Toytime Triolet Duet)

A Toytime Triolet Duet





TREASURED STILL

Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
I still think that they’re the best,
upon a shelf my toys still nest.
We play each day and hardly rest,
sweet paper dolls and trucks and cranes.
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.

Childhood treasures cherished and loved,
no matter that they’re tattered and worn;
We still get together and have fun every day,
childhood treasures cherished and loved.
My favorite bears and paper planes,
playing dress-up even if clothes are torn;
childhood treasures cherished and loved
no matter that they’re tattered and worn.

(c) barbara kausteklis 3-9-12

Written for CPC "Friday Fling/
The Friday Fling Plays Poetically With Our Favorite Toys

http://www.friendburst.com/blog/83458/friday-fling-plays-poetically-favorite-toys/

And also for BFF #173/"Toy Story."




https://sites.google.com/site/onestopblogworld/Downhome/Topic2/bff173toystory
and
http://www.facebook.com/groups/BFF4FUN/


According to ShadowPoetry.com,
the triolet format:

According to ShadowPoetry.com,

"A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines."

Thanks always for your visits and comments.

Big Hugs.

~barb~

3 comments:

  1. A triumph of the form, adorably presented!

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    1. Thanks so much, Leeza! Always such fun to try the forms presented in the Friday Fling challenges which I would never try otherwise. They are still rather like mental gymnastics for me. But fun in the end.

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