A Toytime Triolet Duet
TREASURED STILL
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
I still think that they’re the best,
upon a shelf my toys still nest.
We play each day and hardly rest,
sweet paper dolls and trucks and cranes.
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
Childhood treasures cherished and loved,
no matter that they’re tattered and worn;
We still get together and have fun every day,
childhood treasures cherished and loved.
My favorite bears and paper planes,
playing dress-up even if clothes are torn;
childhood treasures cherished and loved
no matter that they’re tattered and worn.
(c) barbara kausteklis 3-9-12
Written for CPC "Friday Fling/
The Friday Fling Plays Poetically With Our Favorite Toys
http://www.friendburst.com/blog/83458/friday-fling-plays-poetically-favorite-toys/
And also for BFF #173/"Toy Story."
https://sites.google.com/site/onestopblogworld/Downhome/Topic2/bff173toystory
and
http://www.facebook.com/groups/BFF4FUN/
According to ShadowPoetry.com,
the triolet format:
According to ShadowPoetry.com,
"A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines."
Thanks always for your visits and comments.
Big Hugs.
~barb~
TREASURED STILL
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
I still think that they’re the best,
upon a shelf my toys still nest.
We play each day and hardly rest,
sweet paper dolls and trucks and cranes.
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
Childhood treasures cherished and loved,
no matter that they’re tattered and worn;
We still get together and have fun every day,
childhood treasures cherished and loved.
My favorite bears and paper planes,
playing dress-up even if clothes are torn;
childhood treasures cherished and loved
no matter that they’re tattered and worn.
(c) barbara kausteklis 3-9-12
Written for CPC "Friday Fling/
The Friday Fling Plays Poetically With Our Favorite Toys
http://www.friendburst.com/blog/83458/friday-fling-plays-poetically-favorite-toys/
And also for BFF #173/"Toy Story."
https://sites.google.com/site/onestopblogworld/Downhome/Topic2/bff173toystory
and
http://www.facebook.com/groups/BFF4FUN/
According to ShadowPoetry.com,
the triolet format:
According to ShadowPoetry.com,
"A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines."
Thanks always for your visits and comments.
Big Hugs.
~barb~
A triumph of the form, adorably presented!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Leeza! Always such fun to try the forms presented in the Friday Fling challenges which I would never try otherwise. They are still rather like mental gymnastics for me. But fun in the end.
DeleteThis is very lovely. :)
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